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G and her H page 55

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Another update! :w00t:

Action . . . my arch nemesis. Even with my husband helping with the poses and such I'm still not happy with that second row of panels. :tantrum:

I'm fairly pleased with the way Calaen's breastplate came out, but I obviously need work with metal :paranoid:

Well, enjoy! Next update is going to be in TWO weeks due to Thanksgiving.

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theladyems's avatar
Just as an afterthought (future thing) his blade, the way you have his arm slashing.. I kinda thought he was waving it instead of in a smooth clean arc, like I think you intended.

Instead try a more dynamic sweep, with his hand in the followthrough position only, and the motion arc thin at the top, then thickening as it hits the sword.

Action's hard to portray in comics, I totally understand feeling insecure about it. <3 You're very brave for going straight into action with no turning back!